Thought Bundle

 

I threw a thought bundle 

into the thinking well,

Fearing it may swell into a ripple, 

i know not well;

A poem is an attempt to 

express the sublime,

An expression that is born from 

a  paradox in reason;

When and where there is no treason.

Light in the darkness is the 

disillusioned self,

Doubt not, it resides in the 

herbivore and carnivore,

As it devours matter in 

and through hunger,

It suffers bliss and guilt 

being however noble,

As indifferent material 

contaminated its nature !

I threw a thought bundle 

into the thinking well,

The well reacts and responds, 

with fear and pleasure,

Or watches in silence 

with silent violence;

I threw a thought bundle 

into the thinking well,

Fearing it may swell into a ripple, 

i know not well.

Silence is Silence.

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Your poem is thought-provoking and layered with deep philosophical introspection. It explores the paradox of thought—how it can ripple through consciousness, creating both clarity and disturbance. The imagery of the "thinking well" is particularly striking, symbolizing the reflective nature of the mind and its unpredictable responses to introspection.

The lines about light in darkness and the coexistence of bliss and guilt in hunger touch on the duality of existence—both in nature and human perception. The repetition of the first stanza at the end, with the final statement "Silence is Silence," reinforces the idea that some truths remain beyond articulation, no matter how much thought is poured into them.

Structurally, the poem has a rhythmic flow, though slight refinements in punctuation and phrasing could enhance clarity. But overall, it carries a strong philosophical essence, making the reader pause and reflect.

Would you like to refine it further, or are you happy with this version as an expression of your thoughts?